Comment as contributor: the article is looking great, and getting closer to FAC.Because I left them out. Added. Hawkeye7 ( talk ) 21:39, 12 June 2012 (UTC).Anjou had been formed in 10th century and the Angevin rulers had attempted to extend their influence and power across France through careful marriages and political alliances for several centuries.As soon as I read it I felt something was wrong with it, and most readers familiar with Australian military history would too.Clarke is a fun, but important, character from the North Africa campaigns - and oversaw a paradigm shift in how the Allies treated deception (from tactical to strategic thinking).I think the US planes were always considered superior as dogfighters.To make it clear (so as to avoid problems with the image police down the track) you might consider using the fair use rationale template in WP:FURG though.This means Dash funds its own growth and adoption, consensus is guaranteed, and everyone is accountable to the network.Can you please add details about where you sourced the images from exactly.
Please review carefully and let me know how to improve the article further.WP:OVERLINKing - Glorious First of June and Battle of the Nile both linked twice in the lead, HMS Elephant and Vanguard twice in one paragraph, etc.
Armdale Yacht Club is linked later on, but not on its first use at the beginning.As such, I think that it may now meet the A class criteria, and would appreciate other editors views on this.Got some errands to run today so I hope to come back to this either this afternoon or in the next few days (depending on work next week).I am not certain about the statement that the US reserves General of the Army for wartime.Not quite the intent, I have broken up the sentence and emphasised the dual appeal. Cheers.The Dutch East Indies had three classifications for its residents: natives, foreign orientals, and Europeans (including the Japanese, after a treaty).Fixed the refs and footnotes.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk ) 13:59, 26 May 2012 (UTC).I know I referred to PD-URAA, but the placement is a mere split of that template.
Wait, I see you just got started in February.,. nevermind about FAC.Support on prose per standard disclaimer. - Dank ( push to talk ) 20:17, 21 June 2012 (UTC).I considered adding a short notice on the Mudar-Yaman split as well to explain the reference to his Qaysi tribal affiliation (along the lines of Nasr ibn Sayyar ), but this is probably too much and does not immediately affect the article (the hostility towards Junayd after the Defile transcended tribal divisions).
I believe it meets the A-Class criteria, and is one of the most comprehensive accounts of his life available online.I checked the online refs for copyright violations with the Duplication Detector but nothing stood out as being problematic.Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk ) 07:13, 15 April 2012 (UTC).Hadath is linked twice, the second instance should be delinked per WP:REPEATLINK.I found one of him just prior to the Battle of Trenton, which is the appropriate time period for that point in the article.Their database record for this memorial states that the howitzer was modelled on the example held by the Imperial War Museum.In 1991, he published excerpts as a book, which is one of the sources cited in the bibliography.
Grandiose ( me, talk, contribs ) 16:17, 15 April 2012 (UTC).These are my edits. (The toolserver may need a few days before my recent edits show up.) - Dank ( push to talk ) 23:48, 11 July 2012 (UTC).The flight time of the shells at the combat distance exceeded rate of fire.
Here the rank passed various reviews MisterBee1966 ( talk ) 16:46, 12 December 2011 (UTC).Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk ) 22:08, 27 December 2011 (UTC).
Photos at the Canadian DOD are nearly impossible to hunt down, very aggravating as I now remember from my Canadian destroyer articles.This section also may not be necessary given that the occupation of Goodenough Island was a minor affair.Grandiose ( me, talk, contribs ) 11:18, 20 April 2012 (UTC).Nope, plenty of historians call them BCs, even if the Navy formally did not.You can archive this discussion if you would like to clear some space, but my opposition remains until this issue has been resolved.Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk ) 10:22, 15 August 2012 (UTC).Both are valid and working.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk ) 15:55, 25 January 2012 (UTC).One more thing: the images seemed quite bunched up all being on the right, the map in particular causes a large amount of whitespace on my screen (might just be my browser though).
Grandiose ( me, talk, contribs ) 10:04, 13 April 2012 (UTC).Tfxhppum(2018/01/31 11:29) nsuwqemauz, http://criticalthinking.catherinehoman.com/circle.php?order-cheap-pentasa order cheap pentasa, 140, http.Source: At the same time Cooper single-handedly was reorganizing for the military government the 239 court5 in Bavaria, preventing Nazis from securing important posts and spotting as successors Gennans who were qualified and genuinely non-Nazi.Yes, it does.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk ) 16:58, 17 July 2012 (UTC).To be successful here, an article will need at least three explicit supports without an explicit opposes.
Support Read through this at lunch time and really enjoyed it.I started this article as a bit of an experiment to see how much could be written on the service history of a single aircraft type in a single air force, and have been surprised at just how much there was to cover.Some tweaks and minor additions have also taken place, the article went through GA in June, and I feel confident it is up to A-class standards.